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Imagine you are going to an English speaking country; write to a rental agency, the type of house you want. its size. the surroundings.

Imagine you are going to an English speaking country; write to a rental agency, the type of house you want. its size. the surroundings. leeAK

Dear sir, My name is Elina from Haryana, India. I am moving with my family for a one year. I would like to rent a house for a period of one year. I would like a two bedroom apartment with full furnishings, preferably on the ground floor, as my parents are old and it would be difficult for them to go upstairs. If it would be in the range of 800$-1000$ then it would be easy for me to afford. The bedrooms should be pretty specious and the kitchen should have a refrigerator, microwave. The apartment should be close to the garden due to the fact that my parents can maintain their morning walk routine. Moreover, there should be educational facilities proximate to it for my child. Last but not least, public transport should also be available as I would go to my office via bus. Please let me know as you find a suitable apartment for me. Yours faithfully,

Dear sir,

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Elina
 from Haryana, India. I am moving with my family for a one year. I would like to rent a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 for a period of one year.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like a It appears that a hyphen is missing.two-bedroom
two bedroom
 apartment with full furnishings, preferably
 on the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
, as my parents are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and it would be difficult for them to go upstairs. If it Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)waswere
would be
 in the range of The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$800".$800
800$
-The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$1000".$1000
1000$
 then it would be easy for me to afford.

The bedrooms should be pretty specious and the kitchen should have a refrigerator, microwave.

The apartment should be close to the garden due to the fact that my parents can maintain their morning walk routine. Moreover
, there should be educational facilities proximate to it for my child. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, public transport should also
 be available as I would go to my office via bus.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know as you find a suitable apartment for me.

Yours faithfully
, 