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Write a letter to your friend inviting her to your promotion party. • When and how did you get promoted? • When and where the party will be held? • Is there any accommodation facility available nearby?

Write a letter to your friend inviting her to your promotion party. • When and how did you get promoted? • When and where the party will be held? • Is there any accommodation facility available nearby? QVVYP
Dearest Shama, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am sorry I haven’t written for so long. My works keep me so busy, that I never have a minute for myself. I’m writing to invite you to my promotion party. As you know, I am working with a multinational company whose head office is located in Dubai. Last month, I appeared in an interview conducted by them to fill the position of Project manager for a recently started project in Dubai. Fortunately, I got selected for this post and will be leaving for Dubai on 29th of this month. Before leaving, I am throwing a little party on 20th May for family and close friends. You should definitely come! The party is going to be at “The Terrence Café” on Half Moon Beach, where we used to spend a lot of quality time together. I’m sure you know the way to the café very well, but in case you can’t remember simply text me, and I will send you directions. The program for the party is quite fun; we are going to eat, listen to music, and I’ll also make arrangements to spend the followed night at the newly opened resort near the café on the beach. I’m looking forward to see you. Lots of love, Sheyn
Dearest
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Shama
,

I hope this letter finds you in
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good
health. I am sorry I haven’t written for
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so
long. My works
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keep
me
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so
busy, that I never have a minute for myself. I’m writing to invite you to my promotion party.

As you know, I am working with a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
whose head office
is located
in Dubai. Last month, I appeared in an interview conducted by them to
The usual prepositions to use after "fill" is 'with' not "the" Did you mean "fill the position with"?
fill the position of
Project manager for a recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
project in Dubai.
Fortunately
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
selected for this post and will be leaving for Dubai on 29th of this month.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
leaving, I am throwing a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
party on 20th May for family and close friends. You should definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
!

The party is going to be at “The Terrence Café” on Half Moon Beach, where we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
quality time together. I’m sure you know the way to the café
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in case you can’t remember
simply
text me, and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you directions.

The program for the party is quite fun; we are going to eat, listen to music, and I’ll
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
arrangements to spend the followed night at the
newly
opened resort near the café on the beach.

I’m looking forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

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Sheyn
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting her to your promotion party. • When and how did you get promoted? • When and where the party will be held? • Is there any accommodation facility available nearby?

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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