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You have financial issue reqyest your owner to pay the rent late

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Dear Johhn Willison, I Hope you are doing well. Actually, I have one request in front of you. As you know because of this pandemic situation around us, it is very difficult for a common man to survive and due to this my boss is having a very tough time on him, her mother is Covid positive and her father has a heart problem. Doctor suggests for an operation and operation will be done with 10 lacks which is a very large amount. So, My boss is not able to pay me my pay for next two months which will make me financially weak for two months. But I have some saving in my account through which I can manage my this month rent but will not be able to pay next month rent. So, could you please give me a time for some days for next month. I will arrange the money as soon as possible but kindly help me in this time by giving me some relief on my rent. I hope you will understand my situation. I look forward to your reply. Your Sincerely, Manisha Sharma
Dear
Johhn
Willison
,

I Hope you are doing well. Actually, I have one request in front of you. As you know
because of this
pandemic situation around us, it is
very
difficult for a common
man
to survive and due to this my boss is having a
very
tough time on him, her mother is
Covid
positive
and her father has a heart problem.

Doctor suggests for an operation and operation will
be done
with 10 lacks which is a
very
large amount.
So
, My boss is not able to pay me my pay for
next
two
months
which will
make
me
financially
weak for two
months
.
But
I have
some
saving in my account through which I can manage my this
month
rent
but
will not be able to pay
next
month
rent.

So
, could you
please
give me a time for
some
days for
next
month
. I will arrange the money as
soon
as possible
but
kindly
help
me in this time by giving me
some
relief on my rent.

I hope you will understand my situation.
I
look forward to your reply.

Your
Sincerely
,

Manisha Sharma
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IELTS letter You have financial issue reqyest your owner to pay the rent late

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  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
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