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You recently made a friend overseas. write him/her a letter inviting to your home for a party . in your letter: when the party will be held, what kind of party it is ,how she/he can get to our home

You recently made a friend overseas. write him/her a letter inviting to your home for a party. in your letter: when the party will be held, what kind of party it is, how she/he can get to our home 0EWon
Dear Martha, Hope you are doing well and all is fine in Texas. Do you remember me? I am Maria. We had a great time together during the last YEP annual meeting. Now, I am writing this letter to invite you to attend my birthday party at my house. I am heading to sweet 25 on this 25th October. My parents are planning to arrange a party to celebrate my birthday in my home. I wish to invite some of my childhood friends rather than you. 28th October is normal working day, so we are arranged the cake cutting at 7. 30 p. m. After this you can enjoy the live music concert by having a Indo-western cuisines. Most of my family members and friends know French other than our vernacular language. So, if you come you will definitely get a foremost memory. Moreover, on the next day we can explore the idyllic places in New York. Yesterday, I checked with airlines and there is a morning flight from Dubline at 10. 00 a. m. you will be reach New York by 1. 00 p. m. My apartment is near to the airport and call me when you reach. I will fetch you up from the airport. See you at 28th October. Best regards, Mary.
Dear Martha, Hope you are doing well and all is fine in Texas. Do you remember me? I am Maria. We had a great time together during the last YEP annual meeting.
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I am heading to sweet 25 on this 25th October. My parents are planning to arrange a party to celebrate my birthday in my home. I wish to invite
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of my childhood friends
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than you. 28th October is normal working day,
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we
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the cake cutting at 7. 30 p. m.
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After
this you can enjoy the
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live
music concert by having
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Indo-western
cuisines.

Most of my family members and friends know French other than our vernacular language.
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So, if
you
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come
you will definitely
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get
a foremost memory.
Moreover
, on the
next
day we can explore the idyllic places in New York.

Yesterday, I
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checked
with airlines and there is a morning flight from
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Dubline at
10. 00 a. m. you will be reach New York by 1. 00 p. m. My apartment is near to the airport and call me when you reach. I will fetch you up from the airport.
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See
you at 28th October.

Best regards, Mary.
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IELTS letter You recently made a friend overseas. write him/her a letter inviting to your home for a party. in your letter: when the party will be held, what kind of party it is, how she/he can get to our home

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  American English
5 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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