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Rabos y la enfermedad de paterna

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Dear Bernard, My name is Carlos, and I am writing you because my English teacher told me you were looking for a new penfriend. He also gave me your contact details so I could send you this letter. I am a 34 years old man from Spain who works in the aerospace industry as an engineer. I studied mechanical engineering and nowadays I design and analyse satellites for a living. In my free time, I really like listening to music and playing videogames. Although I know that spending hours in front of a screen may be a waste of time, I really enjoy discovering all sort of worlds and interacting with people all around the globe. With respect to outdoor activities, I love hiking, mountaineering, and skiing. The feeling of freedom that you can get while being in the mountains cannot be matched by anything. What about you? I would love to know how you like to spend your free time and what you are interested in. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Carlos
Dear Bernard,

My name is Carlos, and I am writing you
because
my English teacher
told
me you were looking for a new penfriend. He
also
gave me your contact
details
so
I could
send
you this letter.

I am a 34 years
old
man
from Spain who works in the aerospace industry as an engineer. I studied mechanical engineering and nowadays I design and
analyse
satellites for a living.

In my free time, I
really
like listening to music and playing
videogames
. Although I know that spending hours in front of a screen may be a waste of time, I
really
enjoy discovering all sort of worlds and interacting with
people
all around the globe. With respect to outdoor activities, I
love
hiking, mountaineering, and skiing. The feeling of freedom that you can
get
while being in the mountains cannot
be matched
by anything.

What about you? I would
love
to know how you like to spend your free time and what you
are interested
in.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best regards,

Carlos
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IELTS letter Rabos y la enfermedad de paterna

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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