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o single out my baggage out of all luggages • Where and when you lost your bag • What your bag looks like • What its contents were

o single out my baggage out of all luggages • Where and when you lost your bag • What your bag looks like • What its contents were G9MNL
Good morning officer, I, Uma Sameen here by informing you that, last week on 21-10-2021 i. e, Tuesday I travelled from New York to Paris by your airlines. During this journey I, had to carry various number of luggage with me. Due to this reason, unfortunately I missed out my cabin bag in airport only. In addition to my departure times was at 12: 00 pm. As I was early to leave airport an account of my family emergency which was also a vital reason for me to lead in to this blunder step. On the other hand, It will be easy to identify my cabin bag. Because of the key-chain which consist of my own address. It is in red color with blue strips on it’s corners. The size of the bag is neither too large nor too small. On the other hand it represent the PUMA company logo on it. I hope it will be easy to single out my baggage out of all luggages. My reason for wanting my bag in earliest way possible is, due to the presence of documents in it. Which are my project files and study certificates. These papers i have to submit in my college as soon as possible. I Not only abandoned professional data but also I kept my saving money in it for my future studies. It would be such a great help if you’re air-line take an action to my query and end my worry. I will be awaiting for your updates. yours sincerely, Uma
Good
morning officer,

I,
Uma
Sameen
here by informing you that, last week on 21-10-2021 i. e, Tuesday I travelled from New York to Paris by your airlines. During this journey I, had to carry various number of luggage with me. Due to this reason, unfortunately I missed out my cabin
bag
in airport
only
.
In addition
to my departure times was at 12: 00 pm. As I was early to
leave
airport an account of my family emergency which was
also
a vital reason for me to lead in to this blunder step.

On the other hand
, It will be easy to identify my cabin
bag
.
Because
of the key-chain which consist of my
own
address. It is in red color with blue strips
on it’s corners
. The size of the
bag
is neither too large nor too
small
.
On the other hand
it
represent
the PUMA
company
logo on it. I hope it will be easy to single out my baggage out of all
luggages
.

My reason for wanting my
bag
in
earliest
way possible is, due to the presence of documents in it. Which are my project files and study certificates. These papers
i
have to
submit in my college as
soon
as possible. I Not
only
abandoned professional data
but
also
I
kept
my saving money in it for my future studies. It would be such a great
help
if
you’re
air-line take an action to my query and
end
my worry. I will be
awaiting for
your updates.

yours
sincerely
,

Uma
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IELTS letter o single out my baggage out of all luggages • Where and when you lost your bag • What your bag looks like • What its contents were

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6.0
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