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o single out my baggage out of all luggages • Where and when you lost your bag • What your bag looks like • What its contents were

o single out my baggage out of all luggages • Where and when you lost your bag • What your bag looks like • What its contents were G9MNL

Good morning officer, I, Uma Sameen here by informing you that, last week on 21-10-2021 i. e, Tuesday I travelled from New York to Paris by your airlines. During this journey I, had to carry various number of luggage with me. Due to this reason, unfortunately I missed out my cabin bag in airport only. In addition to my departure times was at 12: 00 pm. As I was early to leave airport an account of my family emergency which was also a vital reason for me to lead in to this blunder step. On the other hand, It will be easy to identify my cabin bag. Because of the key-chain which consist of my own address. It is in red color with blue strips on it’s corners. The size of the bag is neither too large nor too small. On the other hand it represent the PUMA company logo on it. I hope it will be easy to single out my baggage out of all luggages. My reason for wanting my bag in earliest way possible is, due to the presence of documents in it. Which are my project files and study certificates. These papers i have to submit in my college as soon as possible. I Not only abandoned professional data but also I kept my saving money in it for my future studies. It would be such a great help if you’re air-line take an action to my query and end my worry. I will be awaiting for your updates. yours sincerely, Uma

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
 morning officer,

I, Possible spelling mistake found.UMAMAUSAUAMaCMA
Uma
Possible spelling mistake found.SateenSame en
Sameen
 here by informing you that, last week on 21-10-2021 i. e, Tuesday I travelled from New York to Paris by your airlines. During this journey I, had to carry various number of luggage with me. Due to this reason, unfortunately I missed out my cabin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 in airport This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. In addition
 to my departure times was at 12: 00 pm. As I was early to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 airport an account of my family emergency which was also
 a vital reason for me to lead in to this blunder step.

On the other hand
, It will be easy to identify my cabin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 of the key-chain which consist of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 address. It is in red color with blue strips Did you mean "on its corners"?on its corners
on it’s corners
. The size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 is neither too large nor too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
. On the other hand
 it Did you mean "represents"?represents
represent
 the PUMA This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 logo on it. I hope it will be easy to single out my baggage out of all Possible spelling mistake found.luggage
luggages
.

My reason for wanting my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 in A determiner is probably missing here: "the earliest".the earliest
earliest
 way possible is, due to the presence of documents in it. Which are my project files and study certificates. These papers Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 submit in my college as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. I Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 abandoned professional data This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 my saving money in it for my future studies. It would be such a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 if Did you mean "your"?your
you’re
 air-line take an action to my query and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 my worry. I will be Did you mean "awaiting" or "waiting for"?awaitingwaiting for
awaiting for
 your updates.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.UMAMAUSAUAMaCMA
Uma