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Scholership letter to United Kingdom

Scholership letter to United Kingdom MrM2N
Dear ALMIGDAD, Thank you for your interest in the Chevening programme. You are receiving this email as you currently have a Chevening application in draft. As we approach Chevening’s application deadline at 12pm GMT (midday UK time) on 2 November 2021, we strongly recommend you submit your application as soon as possible to avoid missing out. We expect a significant increase in Chevening website traffic in the lead up to applications closing. Candidates who submit close to the deadline may experience technical difficulties due to a high number of users accessing the system at the same time. To avoid missing out, do not leave your application to the last minute. Applications cannot be submitted after the deadline. To continue with and submit your application now, please log on to the application portal. We look forward to receiving your application soon.
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ALMIGDAD
,

Thank you for your interest in the
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Chevening
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programme
. You are receiving this email as you
currently
have a
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Chevening
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application
in draft.

As we approach
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Chevening
’s
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application
deadline at 12pm GMT (midday UK time) on 2 November 2021, we
strongly
recommend you submit your
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application
as
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soon
as possible to avoid missing out.

We
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expect
a significant increase in
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Chevening
website traffic in the lead up to
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applications
closing. Candidates who submit close to the deadline may experience technical difficulties due to a high number of users accessing the system at the same time. To avoid missing out, do not
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leave
your
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application
to the last minute.
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Applications
cannot
be submitted
after the deadline.

To continue with and submit your
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application
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now
,
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please
log on to the
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application
portal.

We look forward to receiving your
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application
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soon
.
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IELTS letter Scholership letter to United Kingdom

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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