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Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. 9wLoj

Dear Accommodation Officer, I am writing to you, due to the fact I have been having troubles with my roommate who has been inviting friends and having parties most of the time, as far as I concern, there are rules every student must follow but it is not the case. This sort of situations are increasing their frequency and I can not study even maintain the concentration to finish my duties. Furthermore, there are personal things that they took without my permission, for instance, my books, when I schedule in advance to study some material I could not because some of them took from my desk. For these reasons, I would like to consider to arrange a single room for me, as you know this stage of life can have rebounds to my career. I hope you drill down into my situation to place me into another building which encourage me with better environment to concentrate properly.

Dear Accommodation Officer,

I am writing to you, due to the fact I have been having troubles with my roommate who has been inviting friends and having parties most of the time, as far as I concern, there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 every student This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 follow This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is not the case. This sort of situations Possible agreement error. Did you mean "is"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'are' is not always incorrect.)is
are
 increasing their frequency and I can not study even maintain the concentration to finish my duties.

Furthermore
, there are personal things that they took without my permission, for instance
, my books, when I schedule in advance to study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 material I could not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them took from my desk. For these reasons, I would like to The verb 'consider' is used with the gerund form: "consider arranging".consider arranging
consider to arrange
 a single room for me, as you know this stage of life can have rebounds to my career.

I hope you drill down into my situation to place me into another building which encourage me with better environment to concentrate properly
. 