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you recently lost the driving License and someone sent it back thank him

you recently lost the driving License and someone sent it back thank him 7a066
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to thank you for returning my driving license, which was lost last week. I commute to office by Car, without License I would have been into big trouble, as I am not even used to public transport. Also issuing a new license would take more than one month, as per new guidelines given by the state government. I have recently moved to Hyderabad and being new to this place I would have faced many challenges without a license, as driving license is a vital document. But I am grateful to you as I do not have to face any hardships in finding my driving license. May I enquire where you found my license? Was it in the office campus? I would like to invite you to my house this weekend to express my gratitude. I will be obliged if you can take some time from your schedule, so that we can meet. Let me know your availability for this weekend. I Look forward to our meeting this weekend. Yours faithfully Udayashree
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to thank you for returning my driving
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license
, which
was lost
last week.

I commute to office by Car, without
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License
I would have been into
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big
trouble, as I am not even
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used
to public transport.
Also
issuing a new
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license
would take more than one month, as per new guidelines
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given
by the state
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government
. I have recently
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moved
to Hyderabad and being new to this place I would have faced
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many
challenges without a
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license
, as driving
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license
is a vital document.
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But
I am grateful to you as I do not
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have to
face any hardships in finding my driving license.

May I
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enquire
where you found my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
license
? Was it in the office campus? I would like to invite you to my
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house
this weekend to express my gratitude. I will
be obliged
if you can take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time from your schedule,
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so
that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know your availability for this weekend.

I Look forward to our meeting this weekend.

Yours
faithfully


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Udayashree

IELTS letter you recently lost the driving License and someone sent it back thank him

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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