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Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter,  give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat  explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction  ask about what action will be taken to improve the service

Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter,  give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat  explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction  ask about what action will be taken to improve the service bY37q
dear sir, madam i am writing you this letter regarding the issues that i faced during my journey. i recently travelled to Toronto from Montreal on your train number 13. i booked my ticket online and ticket number was 56489751. my trip was just a one-way trip. i travelled on January 24th 2021. my boarding time was 2: 00pm. My seat number was 2 and it was just 1st seat on the right side at the entry gate. But, i faced some difficulties during this trip. actually the seat that your company offered me was not comfortable at all. it was the wooden seat and I paid extra money for the cusion seat. And the train heater was working slow. I was feeling very cold inside the coach. I recommend you to provide correct information on your website regarding seats and availability. There should be someone in the train coach that can address this kind of issues on the spot. Thanks, Ravinder
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am writing you this letter regarding the issues that
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faced during my journey.
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recently travelled to Toronto from Montreal on your train number 13.
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booked my ticket online and ticket number was 56489751.
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my
trip was
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a one-way trip.
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travelled on January 24th 2021.
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my
boarding time was 2: 00pm. My
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number was 2 and it was
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just
1st
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seat
on the right side at the entry gate.

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,
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i
faced
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difficulties during this trip.
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actually
the
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seat
that your
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company
offered me was not comfortable at all.
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it
was the wooden
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seat
and I paid extra money for the
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cusion
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seat
. And the train heater was working slow. I was feeling
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very
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cold
inside the coach.

I recommend you to provide correct information on your website regarding
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seats
and availability. There should be someone in the train coach that can address this kind of issues on the spot.

Thanks,

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Ravinder
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter,  give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat  explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction  ask about what action will be taken to improve the service

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