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I am writing this letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV show by the reporter of the newpaper.

I am writing this letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV show by the reporter of the newpaper. RN0AQ
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV show by the reporter of the newpaper. The name of show is Sherlock Holmes and it is related to solving crimes by the detective. One of your reporter, Mr Patrick, while giving interview on the television, complained about the show that this programme is creating fears among the viewers by presenting different kinds of crime scenes. I, however, disagree with him as this detective series make people aware about different possibilies of criminal activities. This fictional show is very fascinating and it presents different techniques and methods of solving puzzzles with the help of few clues, owing to which I watch this show. Apart from this, it also assist me in improving my thinking abilities as soving of mysteries requires deep thoughts. I request you to take necessary action against the reporter because his words can affect the popularity of the show. He made these allegation without analysing the benefits of the show. Hope you will take some action against Mr. Patrick.
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV
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show
by the reporter of the
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newpaper
.

The name of
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show
is Sherlock Holmes and it
is related
to solving crimes by the detective. One of your reporter, Mr Patrick, while giving interview on the television, complained about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
that this
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programme
is creating fears among the viewers by presenting
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different
kinds of crime scenes. I,
however
, disagree with him as this detective series
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make
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people
aware about
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different
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possibilies
of criminal activities.

This fictional
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show
is
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very
fascinating and it presents
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different
techniques and methods of solving
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puzzzles
with the
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help
of few clues, owing to which I
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watch
this
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show
. Apart from this, it
also
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assist
me in improving my thinking abilities as
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soving
of mysteries requires deep thoughts.

I request you to take necessary action against the reporter
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because
his words can affect the popularity of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
. He made
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these allegation
without
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analysing
the benefits of the
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show
.

Hope you will take
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some
action against Mr. Patrick.
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IELTS letter I am writing this letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV show by the reporter of the newpaper.

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