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Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam, WygLa
Dear Sir, I have been working in the same project for almost 2 years. I would like explore few opportunities from my current role, so I have enrolled for Phyton training and will be on leave from 15th December to 17th December. I would like to give details about this training. It is basically 3 days course. This training covers all the basics of python and all the coding languages. It also gives an brief idea how the python can be used in different applications and systems. As you are aware I always wanted to learn phyton, but I was lacking basics of coding and last month I have completed training in the coding I am able to enroll for phyton as per my interest. After completing this particular training. I will be able to apply for the position of developer in our company and work accordingly I would request you to approve my leave for the training. I have already completed all my assignments on time and explained it to my team mates so that they can handle in my absence. Your Sincerely Deepthi Hegde
Dear Sir,

I have been working in the same project for almost 2 years. I would like explore few opportunities from my
current
role,
so
I have enrolled for
Phyton
training
and will be on
leave
from 15th December to 17th December.

I
would like to give
details
about this
training
. It is
basically
3 days course. This
training
covers all the basics of python and all the coding languages. It
also
gives
an
brief
idea
how the python can be
used
in
different
applications and systems.

As you are aware I always wanted to learn
phyton
,
but
I was lacking basics of coding and last month I have completed
training
in the coding I am able to enroll for
phyton
as per my interest. After completing this particular
training
. I will be able to apply for the position of developer in our
company
and work
accordingly


I would request you to approve my
leave
for the
training
.
I
have already completed all my assignments on time and
explained
it to my
team mates
so
that they can handle in my absence.

Your
Sincerely


Deepthi
Hegde
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IELTS letter Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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