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Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam, WygLa
Dear Sir, I have been working in the same project for almost 2 years. I would like explore few opportunities from my current role, so I have enrolled for Phyton training and will be on leave from 15th December to 17th December. I would like to give details about this training. It is basically 3 days course. This training covers all the basics of python and all the coding languages. It also gives an brief idea how the python can be used in different applications and systems. As you are aware I always wanted to learn phyton, but I was lacking basics of coding and last month I have completed training in the coding I am able to enroll for phyton as per my interest. After completing this particular training. I will be able to apply for the position of developer in our company and work accordingly I would request you to approve my leave for the training. I have already completed all my assignments on time and explained it to my team mates so that they can handle in my absence. Your Sincerely Deepthi Hegde
Dear Sir,

I have been working in the same project for almost 2 years. I would like explore few opportunities from my
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current
role,
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so
I have enrolled for
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Phyton
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training
and will be on
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leave
from 15th December to 17th December.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to give
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details
about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
. It is
basically
3 days course. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
covers all the basics of python and all the coding languages. It
also
gives
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
brief
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idea
how the python can be
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used
in
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different
applications and systems.

As you are aware I always wanted to learn
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phyton
,
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but
I was lacking basics of coding and last month I have completed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
in the coding I am able to enroll for
Possible spelling mistake found.
phyton
as per my interest. After completing this particular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
. I will be able to apply for the position of developer in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and work
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accordingly


I would request you to approve my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have already completed all my assignments on time and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
it to my
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
team mates
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can handle in my absence.

Your
Sincerely


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Deepthi
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Hegde

IELTS letter Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

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  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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