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A friend of yours is applying for a job in a popular shop, as a retail shop assistant for English speaking tourists visiting your city. The shop has asked you to provide a character for your friend. The reference should indicate how long you have known each other. It must include a detailed description of the person's character. The reason why he or she would be suitable for the job.

A friend of yours is applying for a job in a popular shop, as a retail shop assistant for English speaking tourists visiting your city. The shop has asked you to provide a character for your friend. The reference should indicate how long you have known each other. It must include a detailed description of the person's character. The reason why he or she would be suitable for the job. qV1Wd
Dear Sir, I am Ankur Arora, Kim's friend. I am writing this letter to inform you, the choice you have made by shortilisting my friend for a shop assistant at your store would be definetly fruitful if you would select him. Ever since I had joined college, he has been my close freind. Thus I would be the best person for his reference as today we both post graduate and I know him for about five years now. While we were studying in our bachelors programme some seniors tried ragging us, which was against the law. Instead of being afraid of seniors group he complained about the entire incident to the college incharge next day and proved, when not even fear or hesitate to take relevant action. Finally, the marketing and counselling skills in him would definately makes him suitable for this job and I have seen this ability in him in our MBA training groups during college. looking forward to your yes for my friend. yours faithfully Ankur Arora
Dear Sir,

I am
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Ankur
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Arora
, Kim's friend. I am writing this letter to inform you, the choice you have made by
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shortilisting
my friend for a shop assistant at your store would be
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definetly
fruitful if you would select him.

Ever since I had
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joined
college, he has been my close
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freind
.
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Thus
I would be the best person for his reference as
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today
we both post graduate and I know him for about five years
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now
.

While we were studying in our bachelors
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programme
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some
seniors tried ragging us, which was against the law.
Instead
of being afraid of seniors group he complained about the entire incident to the college
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incharge
next
day and proved, when not even fear or hesitate to take relevant action.

Finally
, the marketing and counselling
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skills
in him would
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definately
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makes
him suitable for this job and I have
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seen
this ability in him in our MBA training groups during college.

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looking
forward to your yes for my friend.

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yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter A friend of yours is applying for a job in a popular shop, as a retail shop assistant for English speaking tourists visiting your city. The shop has asked you to provide a character for your friend. The reference should indicate how long you have known each other. It must include a detailed description of the person's character. The reason why he or she would be suitable for the job.

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