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A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do

A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do Jo3ak
Dear sir, I am writing on behalf of all the residents of Connaught Residency, to show all concerns over, Eszec Private Limited seeking approval for setting up a sugar production mill in proximity of our dwelling area. Although the company advocates that the project will bring employment. However, we believe project will not only hamper the environment but also bring health hazards to local dwellers. The poisonous smoke emitted from factory will result into lung diseases and the liquid waste disposed in nearby water resources will enhance vulnerablility of stomach related diseases among residents. Moreover, the noises generated at factory site will hamper the peaceful environment of the area and will be the cause of anemia and blood related diseases, among Old residents. In order to maintain the decent living standards, you are requested to restrict the setup plan near our area. However, acres of land lying barren on the outskirts of the city will be best place for factory setup. Doing so, the council can ensure development of a downtrodden area, along with ensuring healthy living conditions of our dwelling area. Thus, kindly permit the proposal keeping well being of the inhabitants at prime and refrain company from setting up a unit near by the society. Hoping to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Meenakshi kalyan
Dear sir,

I am writing on behalf of all the residents of
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Connaught
Residency, to
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show
all concerns over,
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Eszec
Private Limited seeking approval for setting up a sugar production mill in proximity of our dwelling area.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
advocates that the project will bring employment.
However
, we believe project will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
hamper the environment
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but
also
bring health hazards to local dwellers. The poisonous smoke emitted from factory will result into lung diseases and the liquid waste disposed in nearby water resources will enhance
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vulnerablility
of stomach related diseases among residents.
Moreover
, the noises generated at factory site will hamper the peaceful environment of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
and will be the cause of anemia and blood related diseases, among
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Old
residents.

In order to maintain the decent living standards, you
are requested
to restrict the setup plan near our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
.
However
, acres of land lying barren on the outskirts of the city will
A determiner is probably missing here: "be the best".
be best
place for factory setup. Doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, the council can ensure development of a downtrodden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
, along with ensuring healthy living conditions of our dwelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
.
Thus
, kindly permit the proposal keeping
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well being
of the inhabitants at prime and refrain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
from setting up a unit
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
the society.

Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from your side.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Meenakshi
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kalyan

IELTS letter A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do

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  American English
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