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Letter to landlord complaining about room partner

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DEAR SIR OR MADAM, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER WITH REGARDS TO A PROBLEM WHICH HAS EMERGED BECAUSE OF EXISTING ROOM SHARING ARRANGEMENTS. I AM STUDYING BIOCHEMISTRY PROGRAM AND HAVE JOINED COLLEGE AS FRESHMEN THIS YEAR. BASIS THE ROOM SHARING ARRANGEMENTS, I WAS ALIGNED WITH ONE OF THE STUDENTS ENROLLED IN STUDYING MUSIC. UNFORTUNATELY, DUE TO DIFFERENCE IN NATURE OF STUDIES, WE BOTH ARE STRUGGLING TO GET ENOUGH SPACE TO PRACTISE WHAT IS BEING TAUGHT TO US IN LECTURES, HOWEVER, BOTH OF US MAXIMIZE OUR EFFORTS TO DIVIDE THE DAY IN A MANNER SO THAT BOTH OF US COULD ACCESS STUDY AREA FOR ATLEAST 2 HOURS A DAY TO PRACTISE WHAT WE HAVE LEARNT IN A DAY. THOUGH SPENDING ONLY 2 HOURS TOWARDS PRACTISE DOESN’T SEEMS ENOUGH CONSIDERING THE TOPICS WE HAVE IN OUR CURRICULUM. I REQUEST YOU TO HELP ME WITH CHANGING MY CURRENT ROOM SHARING ARRANGEMENT AND ALIGN ME TO SOMEONE WITH SAME NATURE OF STUDY PREFERABLY SINCE TO PASS THE FALL SEMESTER EXAMS I WOULD NEED TO PRACTISE FOR MORE HOURS AS THE EXAM DATES ARE ALREADY ANNOUNCED. I LOOK FORWARD TO RECEIVING YOUR RESPONSE ON ABOVE STATED CONCERN. YOURS FAITHFULLY, MOHIT
DEAR SIR OR MADAM,

I AM WRITING THIS LETTER
WITH REGARDS TO
A PROBLEM WHICH HAS EMERGED
BECAUSE
OF EXISTING ROOM SHARING ARRANGEMENTS.

I AM STUDYING BIOCHEMISTRY PROGRAM AND HAVE
JOINED
COLLEGE AS FRESHMEN THIS YEAR. BASIS THE ROOM SHARING ARRANGEMENTS, I
WAS ALIGNED
WITH ONE OF THE STUDENTS ENROLLED IN STUDYING MUSIC. UNFORTUNATELY, DUE TO DIFFERENCE IN NATURE OF STUDIES, WE BOTH ARE STRUGGLING TO
GET
ENOUGH
SPACE TO
PRACTISE
WHAT IS
BEING TAUGHT
TO US IN LECTURES,
HOWEVER
, BOTH OF US MAXIMIZE OUR EFFORTS TO DIVIDE THE DAY IN A MANNER
SO
THAT BOTH OF US COULD ACCESS STUDY AREA FOR
ATLEAST
2 HOURS A DAY TO
PRACTISE
WHAT WE HAVE
LEARNT
IN A DAY. THOUGH SPENDING
ONLY
2 HOURS TOWARDS
PRACTISE
DOESN’T
SEEMS
ENOUGH
CONSIDERING THE TOPICS WE HAVE IN OUR CURRICULUM.

I REQUEST YOU TO
HELP
ME WITH CHANGING MY
CURRENT
ROOM SHARING ARRANGEMENT AND ALIGN ME TO SOMEONE WITH SAME NATURE OF STUDY
PREFERABLY
SINCE TO PASS THE FALL SEMESTER EXAMS I WOULD NEED TO
PRACTISE
FOR MORE HOURS AS THE EXAM DATES ARE ALREADY ANNOUNCED.

I LOOK FORWARD TO RECEIVING YOUR RESPONSE ON ABOVE STATED CONCERN.

YOURS
FAITHFULLY
,

MOHIT
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IELTS letter Letter to landlord complaining about room partner

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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