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You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly.

You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly. MYno

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the not good service provided by your called " New Car" company. In fact, I expected a better service from you. On the 5th of July I visited one of your local workshop in order to repair my car which is called LADA. Looking around the workshop I encountered expected item and I asked a workshop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to amend my car. A day later, it did not honk while I was driving that day. And the next problem, the rudder of the car did not turn on the left, in the results I am extremely angry. I had paid a lot money for your service, so I would like you to revise my car. I am looking forward to your reply and the resolution of the matter. I will wait two days before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me. Your sincerely Mr Brown.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 provided by your called Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
" 
New CarUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In fact, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 a better You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 from you.

On the 5th of July I visited one of your local workshop in order to repair my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 which is called
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LADA
. Looking around the workshop I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and I asked a workshop assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to amend my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. A day later, it did not honk while I was driving that day. And the next
 problem, the Use "(rudder)" if you mean to express an extreme with this adjective.(rudder)
rudder
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 did not turn on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, in the results I am The extreme adjective for angry is "furious".furious
extremely angry
. I had paid If you mean a great quantity, use "a lot of money"?a lot of money
a lot money
 for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would like you to revise my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. I am looking forward to your reply and the resolution of the matter. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will wait two days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 turning to Customer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
Service
 Association responsible for this problem. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me.

Your sincerely


Mr Brown. 