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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.

You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. mBG1
Dear Sir, I am writing this latter to make a complain about your services which I am facing right now. I have ordered a new cheque book two books ago but still I did not received yet. My account number is 00012345. I came personally to visit your bank on 15 April at 12: 00 noon and met you cleark at desk number 4 where usually people submitted all their application. I also requested to you cleark that, I have to make some payment to my vendor so please let me know once you received my new cheque book I will come and collect it. Please check and let me know when will I get it. This is serious issue I want to know which action you will take against your staff so that no one suffer the same problem. I am waiting for your quick reponse. Yours sincerely, Karan Patel
Dear Sir,

I am writing this latter to
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make
a
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complain
about your services which I am facing right
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now
. I have ordered a new
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cheque
book two books ago
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but
still
I did not
The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "receive"
received
yet
.

My account number is 00012345. I came
personally
to visit your bank on 15 April at 12: 00 noon and met you
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cleark
at desk number 4 where
usually
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people
submitted all their application. I
also
requested to you
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cleark
that, I
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have to
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make
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some
payment to my vendor
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so
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please
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let
me know once you received my new
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cheque
book I will
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come
and collect it.
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Please
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check
and
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let
me know when will I
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get
it.

This is serious issue I want to know which action you will take against your staff
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so
that no one suffer the same problem. I am waiting for your quick
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reponse
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Karan
Patel

IELTS letter You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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