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You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends.

You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Pddp

Dear Shahrooz, Thanks for sending me your recent trip photos. There was magnificent nature over there, and I really enjoy it, although I noticed that you bought a new phone and I gotcha a present for you! I ordered you a brand-new smartwatch. I always knew that you have been interested in technology since you were a child. This watch not only has excellent technological features, but also it's great for monitoring health and daily activities, and it also got a modern and shiny look! Anyway, I plan to send the gift this week in a fast cargo and hope you will receive it the following Friday. I wanted to make sure that the package cargo is strong enough, but please check the watch's health immediately. If there were an issue, let me know to fix it. I haven't checked it myself, but sometimes watches are broken already. I chose this gift because not only it's a handy device, but it also will fit your new phone as well. I hope you like it! Take care and stay fine. Warm wishes Payam

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Shahrooz
,

Thanks for sending me your recent trip photos. There was magnificent nature over there, and I really
 enjoy it, although I noticed that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a new phone and Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I gotcha
 a present for you!

I ordered you a brand-new smartwatch. I always knew that you have been interested
 in technology since you were a child. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 has excellent technological features, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 it's great for monitoring health and daily activities, and it also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a modern and shiny look!

Anyway, I plan to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the gift this week in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 cargo and hope you will receive it the following Friday. I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that the package cargo is strong This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
's health immediately. If there were an issue, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it. I haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 it myself, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
watches
are broken
 already.

I chose this gift This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 it's a handy device, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it also
 will fit your new phone as well
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you like it! Take care and stay fine.

Warm wishes

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