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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do gXOD
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you to inform you that I have missed very significant documents in your hotel. This happened today in the morning. I was taking part in a conference, which is going in your hotel. Maybe, I have left my papers in conference hall “A”, I was sitting in the fourth row second place from the window. Also, I could leave these documents in the restaurant when I was drinking tea during a coffee break. The papers I have missed contain just signed contract with another company and it will be very difficult to restore it, because the general manager of our company who signed this document has already returned to the head office in London. I will be very grateful if you search the documents I had left. They were in the red leather folder and there is a golden lion printed in front of that folder. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours sincerely, Nikolay Tabak.
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you to inform you that I have missed
very
significant
documents
in your hotel.

This happened
today
in the morning. I was taking part in a conference, which is going in your hotel. Maybe, I have
left
my papers in conference hall “A”, I was sitting in the fourth row second place from the window.
Also
, I could
leave
these
documents
in the restaurant when I was drinking tea during a coffee break.

The papers I have missed contain
just
signed contract with another
company
and it will be
very
difficult to restore it,
because
the general manager of our
company
who signed this
document
has already returned to the head office in London.

I will be
very
grateful if you search the
documents
I had
left
. They were in the red leather folder and there is a golden lion printed in front of that folder.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours
sincerely
,

Nikolay
Tabak
.
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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