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WRITTEN MEDIATION your homework

WRITTEN MEDIATION your homework BooV
Hi Alice, Of course, I can help you with your homework. That’s what family is for! The infographic shows how an ordinary ecosystem works. All is linked, either animals and plants, each one has its role in the ecosystem. For instance, plants, trees and grass need enough water and sunlight to grow and to turn CO2 into oxygen. In addition, vegetation provides food to herbivorous animals. Then, those animals are eaten by meat-eaters. Apart from that, there are underground species that can produce nutrients for the plants from decomposing of the vegetation or dead animals. And then the cycle begins again without stoping. Get well soon and good luck in your exams! Your favourite uncle. Robert
Hi Alice,

Of course
, I can
help
you with your homework. That’s what family is for!

The infographic
shows
how an ordinary ecosystem works. All
is linked
, either
animals
and plants, each one has its role in the ecosystem.

For instance
, plants, trees and grass need
enough
water and sunlight to grow and to turn CO2 into oxygen.
In addition
, vegetation provides food to herbivorous
animals
. Then, those
animals
are eaten
by meat-eaters.

Apart from that, there are underground species that can produce nutrients for the plants from decomposing of the vegetation or dead
animals
. And then the cycle
begins
again without
stoping
.

Get
well
soon
and
good
luck in your exams!

Your
favourite
uncle.

Robert
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IELTS letter WRITTEN MEDIATION your homework

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  American English
8 paragraphs
115 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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