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You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say – When did it happen? – Describe the problem. – Suggest what could be done about it.

You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say – When did it happen? – Describe the problem. – Suggest what could be done about it. 8GMOx
Dear Mr. Smith, I am facing an issue in my flat now. Since last week, I found out the bathroom roof is leaking which is getting worst day by day. I am writing to you to ask you for a technician to check the pipes and repairment if it is needed. Last weekend, I had travelled to my hometown to visit my family. When I come back, I heard some strange sounds coming from the bathroom. First, I thought, there is something wrong with the windows but when I got home the next day, I found out that the bathroom floor is thoroughly wet. It was Monday evening that I saw a big hole in the bathroom roof which was leaking. The problem is not the leaking roof only but also the issues that it made for me to use bathroom. It is quite sleepy and I cannot even use the toilet as the water is leaking. I also should clean the floor every an hour and every day I am coming home I have fear of seeing all my stuff floating on the water. I think a technician should check the pipes as I know there were quite old. Apart from that, you should renew the whole sanitation system of this flat. The title also should be changed because they are now damaged due to water leaking. I look forward to hearing from you soon Regards Kevin
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am facing an issue in my flat
now
. Since last week, I found out the
bathroom
roof is leaking which is getting
worst
day by day. I am writing to you to ask you for a technician to
check
the pipes and repairment if it
is needed
.

Last weekend, I had travelled to my hometown to visit my family. When I
come
back, I heard
some
strange sounds coming from the
bathroom
.
First
, I
thought
, there is something
wrong
with the windows
but
when I
got
home the
next
day, I found out that the
bathroom
floor is
thoroughly
wet. It was Monday evening that I
saw
a
big
hole in the
bathroom
roof which was leaking.

The problem is not the leaking roof
only
but
also
the issues that it made for me to
use
bathroom
. It is quite sleepy and I cannot even
use
the
toilet
as the water is leaking. I
also
should clean the floor every an hour and every day I am coming home I have fear of seeing all my stuff floating on the water.

I
think
a technician should
check
the pipes as I know there were quite
old
. Apart from that, you should renew the whole sanitation system of this flat. The title
also
should be
changed
because
they are
now
damaged due to water leaking.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon


Regards

Kevin
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IELTS letter You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say – When did it happen? – Describe the problem. – Suggest what could be done about it.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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