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Patient's treatment process

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The patient's name is Yaşar Bağ. he is 32 years old and has diabetes hypertension and cardiac defect. using subcutaneous insulin injection for diabetes in the morning and evening. For hypertension, adalat and capril are used in the morning and evening, and blood pressure monitoring is required. In the same way, it is necessary to routinely monitor blood sugar by measuring blood sugar 3 times a day. In addition, the patient needs to use 100 mg aspirin due to cardiac defect. Therefore, close follow-up of the patient in terms of tachycardia and bradycardia is very important.
The patient's name is
Yaşar
Bağ
.
he
is 32 years
old
and has diabetes hypertension and cardiac defect.
using
subcutaneous insulin injection for diabetes in the morning and evening. For hypertension,
adalat
and
capril
are
used
in the morning and evening, and blood pressure monitoring
is required
.
In the same way
, it is necessary to
routinely
monitor blood sugar by measuring blood sugar 3 times a day.
In addition
, the patient needs to
use
100 mg aspirin due to cardiac defect.
Therefore
, close follow-up of the patient in terms of tachycardia and bradycardia is
very
important
.
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