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I would agree that young people today play a bigger role in society than their parents' or grandparents' generation did This is mainly due to the large social and technological changes that nave increased the experience gap between the generations. For instance, young people today are generally better educated, and because they have been trained from a young age to use computer technology, they have Internet access to information in a way that was unimaginable for earlier generations.

I would agree that young people today play a bigger role in society than their parents' or grandparents' generation did This is mainly due to the large social and technological changes that nave increased the experience gap between the generations. For instance, young people today are generally better educated, and because they have been trained from a young age to use computer technology, they have Internet access to information in a way that was unimaginable for earlier generations. yLaJP
I would agree that young people today play a bigger role in society than their parents' or grandparents' generation did This is mainly due to the large social and technological changes that nave increased the experience gap between the generations. For instance, young people today are generally better educated, and because they have been trained from a young age to use computer technology, they have Internet access to information in a way that was unimaginable for earlier generations.
I would
agree
that young
people
today
play a bigger role in society than their parents' or grandparents' generation did This is
mainly
due to the large social and technological
changes
that nave increased the experience gap between the generations.
For instance
, young
people
today
are
generally
better educated, and
because
they have
been trained
from a young age to
use
computer technology, they have Internet access to information in a way that was unimaginable for earlier generations.
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IELTS letter I would agree that young people today play a bigger role in society than their parents' or grandparents' generation did This is mainly due to the large social and technological changes that nave increased the experience gap between the generations. For instance, young people today are generally better educated, and because they have been trained from a young age to use computer technology, they have Internet access to information in a way that was unimaginable for earlier generations.

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