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Full time job employment agency

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I am a indian national from hyderabad. I am twenty five years old and i have graduated frim jawaharlal Nehru Technology university where i studied bachelors of commerce and i have completed my master degree in finance from osmania University. I am looking for a full-time job and i wonder if you can help me. I am writing to express my interest to get registered with your employment agency. Iam hoping you would enlist me in your database and notify me of suitable job announcement and forward my resume to prospective employers. Probably, i would like a office job, perhaps working as a secretary, office administrator or typist. I would be ready to join immediately. I am a component typist and i am computer literate. In addition, i speak in english, hindi and arabic fluently and i have been learning French for the last one year. While i studied for my degree, i worked as part time office manager for an import export company in mumbai In recent years, i have also hada part time summer jobs as a receptionist in pune. I am looking to hearing form you Yours faithfully Jackson
I am
a
indian
national from
hyderabad
. I am
twenty five
years
old
and
i
have graduated
frim
jawaharlal
Nehru Technology university where
i
studied bachelors of commerce and
i
have completed my master degree in finance from
osmania
University.

I
am looking for a full-time
job
and
i
wonder if you can
help
me.
I
am writing to express my interest to
get
registered with your employment agency.
Iam
hoping you would enlist me in your database and notify me of suitable
job
announcement and forward my resume to prospective employers.
Probably
,
i
would like
a
office
job
, perhaps working as a secretary, office administrator or typist. I would be ready to
join
immediately.

I am a component typist and
i
am
computer literate
.
In addition
,
i
speak in
english
,
hindi
and
arabic
fluently
and
i
have been learning French for the last one year. While
i
studied for my degree,
i
worked as
part time
office manager for an import export
company
in
mumbai
In recent years,
i
have
also
hada
part time
summer
jobs
as a receptionist in
pune
. I am looking to hearing form you Yours
faithfully
Jackson
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IELTS letter Full time job employment agency

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  American English
3 paragraphs
191 words
5.5
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