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You want to study an MBA program at University of Toronto. You want to gather some information about the program and significant details. Please write to International Officer for seeking information. In your letter • describe important points, as peryouropinion, while choosing a school • inquire about any entrance exam and any special consideration you expect • inquire about internship options

You want to study an MBA program at University of Toronto. You want to gather some information about the program and significant details. Please write to International Officer for seeking information. In your letter • describe important points, as peryouropinion, while choosing a school • inquire about any entrance exam and any special consideration you expect • inquire about internship options pe6km

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about the procedure of taking admission in course at University of Toronto. At the onset, I believe commitment to teaching factors as it plays a significant role in study; therefore, I chose your school as one of my friends has completed his schooling from your university and mentioned excellent feedback about resource material while academics. Therefore, I wanted to inquire about the procedure of getting admission, do I need to appear for GMAT exam? If I got good score, do the university provide any special discount on fees? Furthermore, I was wondering whether the university provides internship or not? In addition, do they offer the internship at other locations also such as United States. Looking forward to to clarify these points so that a decision can be made. Yours faithfully, Nikita.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the procedure of taking admission in course at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
University
 of Toronto.

At the onset, I believe commitment to teaching factors as it plays a significant role in study; therefore
, I chose your school as one of my friends has completed his schooling from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 and mentioned excellent feedback about resource material while academics.

Therefore
, I wanted to inquire about the procedure of getting admission, do I need to appear for GMAT exam? If I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 score, do the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 provide any special discount on fees?

Furthermore
, I was wondering whether the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 provides internship or not? In addition
, do they offer the internship at other locations also
 such A determiner is probably missing here: "as the United States".as the United States
as United States
.

Looking forward Possible typo: you repeated a wordto
to to
 clarify these points This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that a decision can be made
.

Yours faithfully
, Nikita. 