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You want to study an MBA program at University of Toronto. You want to gather some information about the program and significant details. Please write to International Officer for seeking information. In your letter • describe important points, as peryouropinion, while choosing a school • inquire about any entrance exam and any special consideration you expect • inquire about internship options

You want to study an MBA program at University of Toronto. You want to gather some information about the program and significant details. Please write to International Officer for seeking information. In your letter • describe important points, as peryouropinion, while choosing a school • inquire about any entrance exam and any special consideration you expect • inquire about internship options pe6km
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about the procedure of taking admission in course at University of Toronto. At the onset, I believe commitment to teaching factors as it plays a significant role in study; therefore, I chose your school as one of my friends has completed his schooling from your university and mentioned excellent feedback about resource material while academics. Therefore, I wanted to inquire about the procedure of getting admission, do I need to appear for GMAT exam? If I got good score, do the university provide any special discount on fees? Furthermore, I was wondering whether the university provides internship or not? In addition, do they offer the internship at other locations also such as United States. Looking forward to to clarify these points so that a decision can be made. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the procedure of taking admission in course at
University
of Toronto.

At the onset, I believe commitment to teaching factors as it plays a significant role in study;
therefore
, I chose your school as one of my friends has completed his schooling from your
university
and mentioned excellent feedback about resource material while academics.

Therefore
, I wanted to inquire about the procedure of getting admission, do I need to appear for GMAT exam? If I
got
good
score, do the
university
provide any special discount on fees?

Furthermore
, I was wondering whether the
university
provides internship or not?
In addition
, do they offer the internship at other locations
also
such
as United States
.

Looking forward
to to
clarify these points
so
that a decision can
be made
.

Yours
faithfully
, Nikita.
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IELTS letter You want to study an MBA program at University of Toronto. You want to gather some information about the program and significant details. Please write to International Officer for seeking information. In your letter • describe important points, as peryouropinion, while choosing a school • inquire about any entrance exam and any special consideration you expect • inquire about internship options

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