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Yaşar Bağ's treatment process

Yaşar Bağ's treatment process G3dxL
The patient's name is Yaşar Bağ. he is 32 years old and has diabetes hypertension and cardiac defect. using subcutaneous insulin injection for diabetes in the morning and evening. For hypertension, adalat and capril are used in the morning and evening, and blood pressure monitoring is required. In the same way, it is necessary to routinely monitor blood sugar by measuring blood sugar 3 times a day. In addition, the patient needs to use 100 mg aspirin due to cardiac defect. Therefore, close follow-up of the patient in terms of tachycardia and bradycardia is esential. The patient's diet should include sugar-free meals and maximum attention should be paid to the fat ratio. The patient has had 3 surgeries previosly and has 4 rib fractures. Because of this, he may have difficulty walking or have low back pain when lifting a heavy object. Nicholoson amp can be used as a pain reliever. If you want to get detailed information about the patient, please do not hesitate to contact us. Kind regards Good luck with.
The patient's name is
Yaşar
Bağ
.
he
is 32 years
old
and has diabetes hypertension and cardiac defect.
using
subcutaneous insulin injection for diabetes in the morning and evening. For hypertension,
adalat
and
capril
are
used
in the morning and evening, and blood pressure monitoring
is required
.
In the same way
, it is necessary to
routinely
monitor blood sugar by measuring blood sugar 3 times a day.
In addition
, the
patient
needs to
use
100 mg aspirin due to cardiac defect.
Therefore
, close follow-up of the
patient
in terms of tachycardia and bradycardia is
esential
. The patient's diet should include sugar-free meals and maximum attention should
be paid
to the
fat
ratio.

The
patient
has had 3 surgeries
previosly
and has 4 rib fractures.
Because of this
, he may have difficulty walking or have low back pain when lifting a heavy object.
Nicholoson
amp can be
used
as a pain reliever.

If you want to
get
detailed information about the
patient
,
please
do not hesitate to contact us.

Kind regards

Good
luck with.
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173 words
6.0
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