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Write some story with contaning some word:gravity,ignorant,dare

Write some story with contaning some word: gravity, ignorant, dare xxVjb

Hi everyone. I am a young boy who is a transfer student to a university in Vietnam. I don’t want to fish for compliments but you can describe me as a cool, sociable, and trendy boy. At lunchtime on my first day at the new university, I came across the girl who was my recent teammate. Her appearance was not something too attractive or special to impress me except for the comments about her. Most of the students eating lunch around me criticized her for being ignorant, mean, and impolite. She could never be loved and cherished by people around her. I strangely felt curious about this girl’s real characteristics. And what she had done last month had changed all the opinions about her. At our university, a group of male students always fought and abused other students. That little girl dared to stand up for the weaker and fought against those students. She made me so surprised and her action was the gravity that the main reason why I decided to ask her out for a date

Hi everyone. I am a young boy who is a transfer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 to a university in Vietnam. I don’t want to fish for compliments This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 me as a cool, sociable, and trendy boy. At lunchtime on my first
 day at the new university, I came across the girl who was my recent teammate. Her appearance was not something too attractive or special to impress me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the comments about her. Most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 eating lunch around me criticized her for being ignorant, mean, and impolite. She could never be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 and cherished by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around her. I strangely
 felt curious about this girl’s real characteristics. And what she had done last month had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 all the opinions about her. At our university, a group of male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 always fought and abused other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. That This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 girl dared to stand up for the weaker and fought against those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. She made me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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