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You recently had a meal in a restaurant in another town. Unfortunately you left your mobile phone in the restaurant. Write a letter to manager, in your letter: Explain what happened Describe your mobile phone Make some suggestion about how you can get your mobile back

You recently had a meal in a restaurant in another town. Unfortunately you left your mobile phone in the restaurant. Write a letter to manager, in your letter: Explain what happened Describe your mobile phone Make some suggestion about how you can get your mobile back j59Ld
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I left my mobile phone at table no. 5 of your Le De Crown restaurant situated in Oxford Street. I visited your restaurant on January 3, 2020 and my bill number is Xyo0598. Last weekend, I along with my three friends visited central London and decided to have dinner at your multi-cuisine restaurant. Since I the best camera quality phone, everyone was clicking pictures with it and I accidentally left my phone at the table and realized it only after reaching Aberdeen. It is an iPhone X in rose gold color with a pink glossy cover which gives it a different look. Also, it has small scratches on the screen. When I dialed my number from home, the waiter named John assured me that phone was safe, and he would give it to the bar Manager. I am really thankful to your cordial staff members for keeping it safe and now I request you to send it through courier to the address on the envelope. Kindly share your bank account number so that I can transfer the courier charges. I apologies for any inconvenience this may have caused to you and I eagerly wait for your quick response. Yours Faithfully,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I
left
my mobile
phone
at table no. 5 of your Le De Crown restaurant situated in Oxford Street. I visited your restaurant on January 3,
2020
and my bill number is Xyo0598.

Last weekend, I along with my three friends visited central London and decided to have dinner at your multi-cuisine restaurant. Since I the best camera quality
phone
, everyone was clicking pictures with it and I
accidentally
left
my
phone
at the table and realized it
only
after reaching Aberdeen. It is an iPhone X in rose gold color with a pink glossy cover which gives it a
different
look.
Also
, it has
small
scratches on the screen.

When I dialed my number from home, the waiter named John assured me that
phone
was safe, and he would give it to the bar Manager. I am
really
thankful to your cordial staff members for keeping it safe and
now
I request you to
send
it through courier to the address on the envelope. Kindly share your bank account number
so
that I can transfer the courier charges.

I
apologies
for any inconvenience this may have caused to you and I
eagerly
wait for your quick response.

Yours
Faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You recently had a meal in a restaurant in another town. Unfortunately you left your mobile phone in the restaurant. Write a letter to manager, in your letter: Explain what happened Describe your mobile phone Make some suggestion about how you can get your mobile back

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  American English
6 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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