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Your English friend, Peter, has written to you asking you to help him organise a special surprise birthday party for his sister, Anna. Read Peter's letter and the notes you have made. Then, using all the information, write to Peter answering his questions and explaining how you think the party could be made special.

Your English friend, Peter, has written to you asking you to help him organise a special surprise birthday party for his sister, Anna. Read Peter's letter and the notes you have made. Then, using all the information, write to Peter answering his questions and explaining how you think the party could be made special. 66l3W
Dear Peter, I’m very happy to hear from you again! Like you say, there’s a lot to think about if we want to make Anna’s party unforgettable. First of all, what you say about booking the Majestic Hotel sounds good, but you know, that is one of the most expensive hotels in town, so are you sure you can afford it? As for the food, I’d recommend pasta, meat and, of course, a huge chocolate birthday cake! You suggest buying Anna a watch but, personally, I don’t think she’ll like this very much, since she already got a new watch for Christmas. Why don’t we get her a plane ticket to Los Angeles instead? She’s always saying she’d love to go there on holiday! And to make the party even more special, we could phone all her old friends from school an invite them to come around. That’d be great, don’t you think? Finally, I’d like to help you with the preparations, but I won’t be able. That day I have to look after my little brother. I’m sorry. Write back soon. Lots of love, MyName
Dear Peter,

I’m
very
happy to hear from you again! Like you say, there’s a lot to
think
about if we want to
make
Anna’s party unforgettable.
First of all
, what you say about booking the Majestic Hotel sounds
good
,
but
you know,
that is
one of the most expensive hotels in town,
so
are you sure you can afford it?

As for the food, I’d recommend pasta, meat and,
of course
, a huge chocolate birthday cake! You suggest buying Anna a
watch
but
,
personally
, I don’t
think
she’ll like this
very
much, since she already
got
a new
watch
for Christmas. Why don’t we
get
her a
plane
ticket to Los Angeles
instead
? She’s always saying she’d
love
to go there on holiday! And to
make
the party even more special, we could phone all her
old
friends from school an
invite
them to
come
around. That’d be great, don’t you
think
?

Finally
, I’d like to
help
you with the preparations,
but
I won’t be able. That day I
have to
look after my
little
brother. I’m sorry.

Write back
soon
. Lots of
love
,

MyName
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IELTS letter Your English friend, Peter, has written to you asking you to help him organise a special surprise birthday party for his sister, Anna. Read Peter's letter and the notes you have made. Then, using all the information, write to Peter answering his questions and explaining how you think the party could be made special.

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  American English
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185 words
6.0
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