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Letter Namangan, Mingbulak July 24, 2021 Delivering service house in Tashkent Subject-Complaint regarding not receiving of orders Dear Sir/Madam On July 22, 2021 I called to your delivering service house and asked from your staffes to bring me John Rohn's two books, namely "The fault in our stars" and "A gift of the Magi"(order No. 000154) to be delivered to Mingbulak sector-3 That books were present for my older sister's birthday. Unfortunately, to my dismay, I have not received the set I ordered for. The party was held to after two days. I am highly disappointed. To resolve the problem, I will wait until you send them. Please let me know as soon as possible what action you propose to take. I look forward to hearing from you within the next one day. Because I should catch up to ready this gift until the celebration. Enclosed are copies of the transaction document and the receipt. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem and will wait until aforementioned time before seeking help from a concumer protection agency. Please contact me at the above address or by phone at93 496 80 02 Yours faithfullyDavid Tompson.
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Namangan
,
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Mingbulak


July 24,
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2021


Delivering service
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house
in Tashkent

Subject-Complaint regarding not receiving of orders

Dear Sir/Madam

On July 22,
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2021
I called to your delivering service
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house
and asked from your
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staffes
to bring me John
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Rohn
's two books,
namely
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"
The fault in our stars
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"
and
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"
A gift of the Magi
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"
(order No. 000154) to
be delivered
to
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Mingbulak
sector-3

That books were present for my older sister's birthday. Unfortunately, to my dismay, I have not received the set I ordered for. The party
was held
to after two days. I am
highly
disappointed. To resolve the problem, I will wait until you
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send
them.
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Please
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let
me know as
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soon
as possible what action you propose to take. I look forward to hearing from you within the
next
one day.
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Because
I should catch up to ready this gift until the celebration. Enclosed are copies of the transaction document and the receipt.

I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem and will wait until aforementioned time
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before
seeking
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help
from a
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concumer
protection agency.
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Please
contact me at the above address or by phone at93 496 80 02

Yours
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faithfullyDavid
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Tompson
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IELTS letter Goods are not delivered.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
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