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You have won lottery recently. You are very much excited and want to share this piece of news with your close friends. -explain how you come into gambling -you have decided at this good news to throw a party -let him/them know about the party venue and arrangement.

You have won lottery recently. You are very much excited and want to share this piece of news with your close friends. -explain how you come into gambling -you have decided at this good news to throw a party -let him/them know about the party venue and arrangement. aAVaX

Dear Rosy, I hope this letter finds you well. Out of a blue, my life got filled with the all flying colours as I have won a lottery worth Rupees one Million and I am writing this letter to break this amazing news. You may wonder how I entered into gambling, but to end up your curiosity let me tell you the story. Last week, while going to my workplace, I was at gas station and got this lottery ticket from there to try my luck. Fortunately, it turned out to be a piece of luck and I won it. To announce this piece of news I have decided to throw a covert party to our group. We are going Maldives next month. You, Heely, John and Selma will be the part of this Island's trip. I will mail you further details. Moreover, be here before a day, we all will fly to gather to Maldives. See you soon. Give my regards to your family. Yours faithfully, Rhea

Dear Rosy,

I hope this letter finds you well. Out of a blue, my life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 filled with the all flying Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
 as I have won a lottery worth Rupees one Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Million, and
Million and
 I am writing this letter to break this amazing news.

You may wonder how I entered into gambling, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up your curiosity This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you the story. Last week, while going to my workplace, I was at gas station and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 this lottery ticket from there to try my luck. Fortunately
, it turned out to be a piece of luck and I won it.

To announce this piece of news I have decided to throw a covert party to our group. We are going Maldives next
 month. You, Possible spelling mistake found.HeelHeelsHeel y
Heely
, John and Selma will be the part of this Island's trip. I will mail you further
The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "detail"detail
details
.

Moreover
, be here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 a day, we all will fly
 to gather A determiner is probably missing here: "to the Maldives".to the Maldives
to Maldives
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Give my regards to your family.

Yours faithfully
,

Rhea