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You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet

You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet aAVjw
Dear Peter, I’m so glad that you’re coming to Montreal next week, as it seems ages since we last saw each other. I hope your family and girlfriend are all well. I actually have a favour to ask you, and I hope you don’t mind. The fact is that I need a few things from my parents’ house, and I’d be so grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase. The first thing is the book of maths calculations which I had at high school – don’t worry, it’s only a small book. I need this because it has all the material I studied for my exams, and I can’t get another copy here in any of the bookshops or on the Internet. The second thing is a packet of those biscuits from the bakery in my old street. I’ve told everyone here how delicious they are, and my new friends are very keen to try them! I do hope that is manageable for you, as it won’t take up much space at all. In the meantime, I’m very excited about seeing you again at the airport on Monday at midday. I’ll be in the arrivals hall, wearing my blue jacket. I can’t wait to see you then. All the best, Simon
Dear Peter,

I’m
so
glad that you’re coming to Montreal
next
week, as it seems ages since we last
saw
each other. I hope your family and girlfriend are all well.
I
actually have a
favour
to ask you, and I hope you don’t mind. The fact is that I need a few things from my parents’
house
, and I’d be
so
grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase.

The
first
thing is the book of
maths
calculations which I had at high school
don’t worry, it’s
only
a
small
book. I need this
because
it has all the material I studied for my exams, and I can’t
get
another copy here in any of the bookshops or on the Internet. The second thing is a packet of those biscuits from the bakery in my
old
street. I’ve
told
everyone here how delicious they are, and my new friends are
very
keen to try them!

I do hope
that is
manageable for you, as it won’t take up much space at all. In the meantime, I’m
very
excited about seeing you again at the airport on Monday at midday.

I’ll be in the
arrivals
hall, wearing my blue jacket.

I can’t wait to
see
you then.

All the best,

Simon
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IELTS letter You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet

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213 words
6.0
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