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my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future.

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that, my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future. Due to the financial issues, I am doing a job with one of the hypermarket in our locality as Accountant. Let me explain the reason that, the Manager of shop is a kind person and due to the fact of my problems he had offered an extra overtime for the additional hours. I understood that, study after the duty will be horrible. Duty hours will be from early morning to midnight 12. During scheduled class time, I will be engaged with my work. I cannot assure that online class will not be beneficial for me. I would like to suggest that, Saturdays and Sundays will be holidays for me. Is it possible to make a class on these days? I am ready to come on these weekends at any time as per your convenience. I hope that you understand my situation. Yours sincerely Sony
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that, my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future. Due to the financial issues, I am doing a job with one of the hypermarket in our locality as Accountant.

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the reason that, the Manager of shop is a kind person and due to the fact of my problems he had offered an extra overtime for the additional hours. I understood that, study after the duty will be horrible. Duty hours will be from early morning to midnight 12. During scheduled
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
time, I will
be engaged
with my work. I cannot assure that online
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
will not be beneficial for me.

I would like to suggest that, Saturdays and Sundays will be holidays for me. Is it possible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
on these days? I am ready to
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come
on these weekends at any time as per your convenience.

I hope that you understand my situation.

Yours
sincerely


Sony
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IELTS letter my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future.

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6 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
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