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my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future.

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that, my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future. Due to the financial issues, I am doing a job with one of the hypermarket in our locality as Accountant. Let me explain the reason that, the Manager of shop is a kind person and due to the fact of my problems he had offered an extra overtime for the additional hours. I understood that, study after the duty will be horrible. Duty hours will be from early morning to midnight 12. During scheduled class time, I will be engaged with my work. I cannot assure that online class will not be beneficial for me. I would like to suggest that, Saturdays and Sundays will be holidays for me. Is it possible to make a class on these days? I am ready to come on these weekends at any time as per your convenience. I hope that you understand my situation. Yours sincerely Sony

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that, my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future. Due to the financial issues, I am doing a job with one of the hypermarket in our locality as Accountant.

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 on these weekends at any time as per your convenience.

I hope that you understand my situation.

Yours sincerely


Sony

IELTS letter my part-time evening course for the subject of computer application have not been able to continue in the future.

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

173 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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