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Dear Ajay, Last month, I had attended the Sunburn Festival in Goa with my friends. Your performance was scintillating and I was awestruck after listening to each and every song of yours in the concert. I consider you as my mentor in music and that day was a blessing for me to see you perform live. You were the inspiration for me and my friends to start our career in music. Five of us have come together and created a band with the name ‘Junoon’. We perform at various clubs in Mumbai and have also collaborated with T-Series for their music albums. We are planning to prepare an album on COVID warriors as a mark of respect. For the same, on behalf of my friends and me, I would request you to be a part of our music album which will be a tribute from the society to the warriors. Do let us know with whom we can get in touch with further details. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Team Junoon

Dear Ajay,

Last month, I had attended the Sunburn Festival in Goa with my friends.

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Yours sincerely
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