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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take yolg
Dear Steve I am changing the electrical system in my flat. Drilling holes in the walls is a part of this process. So, I use noisy instruments for that purpose. Unfortunately, I cannot find any other more quiet solution. Therefore, you can hear this noise. I have taken a vacation on my work during this construction period and try doing all works from 10 am to 4 pm when almost all our neighbours are at work. But I did not know that you are at home on this time. I am really sorry for this inconvenience. To solve this problem we can meet today or tomorrow and discuss appropriate for the construction works in my appartment time. Maybe, you are outside of your flat during some particular period of a day. However, if you are always at home I can give you some amount of money (we can discuss how much when we meet) to compensate your discomfort. I look forward to your respond. Best Wishes, Kogtikov Nikita
Dear Steve

I am changing the electrical system in my flat. Drilling holes in the walls is a part of this process.
So
, I
use
noisy instruments for that purpose. Unfortunately, I cannot find any other more quiet solution.
Therefore
, you can hear this noise. I have taken a vacation on my
work
during this construction period and try doing all works from 10 am to 4 pm when almost all our
neighbours
are at
work
.
But
I did not know that you are at home on this time. I am
really
sorry for this inconvenience.

To solve this problem we can
meet
today
or tomorrow and discuss appropriate for the construction works in my
appartment
time. Maybe, you are
outside of
your flat during
some
particular period of a day.
However
, if you are always at home I can give you
some
amount of money (we can discuss how much when we
meet
) to compensate your discomfort. I look forward to your
respond
.

Best Wishes,
Kogtikov
Nikita
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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