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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take 5d7B
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you about the poor condition of furniture in the rented apartment and would like to bring it to your attention for appropriate action to be taken. I am Susanne who recently moved from Canada to England along with my family last week and had a telephonic conversation with you regarding renting one of your furnished apartments in the downtown area. As I have already moved to the apartment last week via one of your brokers, I am disappointed to say that the furniture's condition is extremely poor. One of the chairs is broken and almirah's locks are not working either. As I am paying hefty amount for this fully-furnished apartment, I would seek your assistance in getting this thing sorted. Therefore, I would request you to replace the broken chair and get the almirahs lock repaired so that we can keep our belongings safe. Your assistance in this matter would be greatly appreciated. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Susanne Task 2
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to inform you about the poor condition of furniture in the rented
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
and would like to bring it to your attention for appropriate action to
be taken
.

I am Susanne who recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
from Canada to England along with my family last week and had a telephonic conversation with you regarding renting one of your furnished
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartments
in the downtown area. As I have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
last week via one of your brokers, I
am disappointed
to say that the furniture's condition is
extremely
poor. One of the chairs
is broken
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
almirah
's locks are not working either.

As I am paying hefty amount for this
fully
-furnished
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
, I would seek your assistance in getting this thing sorted.
Therefore
, I would request you to replace the broken chair and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
almirahs
lock repaired
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our belongings safe.

Your assistance in this matter would be
greatly
appreciated. Hoping to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Susanne

Task 2

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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