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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take 5d7B

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you about the poor condition of furniture in the rented apartment and would like to bring it to your attention for appropriate action to be taken. I am Susanne who recently moved from Canada to England along with my family last week and had a telephonic conversation with you regarding renting one of your furnished apartments in the downtown area. As I have already moved to the apartment last week via one of your brokers, I am disappointed to say that the furniture's condition is extremely poor. One of the chairs is broken and almirah's locks are not working either. As I am paying hefty amount for this fully-furnished apartment, I would seek your assistance in getting this thing sorted. Therefore, I would request you to replace the broken chair and get the almirahs lock repaired so that we can keep our belongings safe. Your assistance in this matter would be greatly appreciated. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Susanne Task 2

Dear Mr Smith,

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apartment
 and would like to bring it to your attention for appropriate action to be taken
.

I am Susanne who recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from Canada to England along with my family last week and had a telephonic conversation with you regarding renting one of your furnished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartments
 in the downtown area. As I have already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 last week via one of your brokers, I am disappointed
 to say that the furniture's condition is extremely
 poor. One of the chairs is broken
 and Possible spelling mistake found.admiralElmiraaliyah
almirah
's locks are not working either.

As I am paying hefty amount for this fully
-furnished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
, I would seek your assistance in getting this thing sorted. Therefore
, I would request you to replace the broken chair and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the Possible spelling mistake found.admiralsaliyahs
almirahs
 lock repaired This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 our belongings safe.

Your assistance in this matter would be greatly
 appreciated. Hoping to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

Susanne

Task 2