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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course Jo6Wk

Dear Sir, I had received a request for providing the feedback for the cookery course in Baking. I had enrolled last month with your cookery school and that was one of the best decisions I have made in my life. The best thing I liked about the course was the way in which it was planned. Even a fresher like me, who had no knowledge about baking, learnt so many things. Also, the whole team of your school made everyone comfortable right from day one and that created bonding amongst us. After completion of course, I have become an entrepreneur and have started a cake shop in Phoenix Mall with the name “Cakery Bakery”. It’s too early to say but people have liked my bakery products and I have been kept busy with the Christmas Cake orders. A recommendation for your school is to start the cookery course on Continental Dishes. It’s an untouched avenue and people like me would like to learn and explore this cuisine. Overall, I am satisfied with the course along with its content and surely will recommend it to my friends, family and neighbours. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Mary Jane

Dear Sir,

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 in Baking. I had enrolled last month with your cookery school and that was one of the best decisions I have made in my life.

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people
 like me would like to learn and explore this cuisine.

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Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
,

Mary Jane