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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you’ve done since the course suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I attended your week-long Indian cookery class earlier this month (from 4th to 10th August) and I am so happy that I got the opportunity to learn so much from you and your staff. The course was perfectly designed and I enjoyed everything I learned from it, especially the introduction to the spices was one of my favourite parts. And perhaps, the most significant thing that I personally have been able to take away is the confidence to give it a go. I am so glad that I have been able to apply and enjoy the skills that I learnt quite a few times since. I prepared a couple of Indian dishes at home and have since moved to a few other dishes, trying to keep it simple for the time being and focusing on understanding the many flavours and applying the techniques. We even invited a few friends and cooked them an Indian dinner which I must say was a success. I can not thank you enough. I will definitely recommend your course to a few friends of mine. I also believe that I would be interested to learn a few Italian dishes and perhaps you can offer a course on that. Yours faithfully, Laura Watso
Dear Sir or Madam,

I attended your week-long Indian cookery
class
earlier this month (from 4th to 10th August) and I am
so
happy that I
got
the opportunity to learn
so
much from you and your staff. The course was
perfectly
designed and
I enjoyed everything I learned from it,
especially
the introduction to the spices was one of my
favourite
parts. And perhaps, the most significant thing that I
personally
have been able to take away is the confidence to give it a go.

I am
so
glad that I have been able to apply and enjoy the
skills
that I
learnt
quite a few times since. I prepared a couple of Indian dishes at home and have since
moved
to a few other dishes, trying to
keep
it simple for the time being and focusing on understanding the
many
flavours
and applying the techniques. We even invited a few friends and cooked them an Indian dinner which I
must
say was a success.

I can not thank you
enough
. I will definitely recommend your course to a few friends of mine.
I
also
believe that I would
be interested
to learn a few Italian
dishes and
perhaps you can offer a course on that.

Yours
faithfully
,

Laura
Watso
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you’ve done since the course suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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