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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Mr Jones, My name is Anna Smith and I am one of the tenants in the three-bedroom flat, that is located in the city center. I am writing you regarding the condition of a certain furniture piece we have in the appartment. The round table in the dining room is wobbly due to the fact that it has uneven legs, which makes it difficulte to sit on. Therefore, we constantly have to place a piece of folded paper under one leg to make it more or less stable. I would like to kindly ask you to replace the table with the new one. Otherwise, I would really appreciate if you could mend the table or come up with a long-term solution to fix the short table leg. Please let me know if you want me to email you picture of the table. Also, do not hesitate to contact me if you require any additional information. Sincerely yours, Anna
Dear Mr Jones,

My name is Anna
Smith and
I am one of the tenants in the three-bedroom flat, that
is located
in the city center. I am writing you regarding the condition of a certain furniture piece we have in the
appartment
.

The round
table
in the dining room is wobbly due to the fact that it has uneven legs, which
makes
it
difficulte
to sit on.
Therefore
, we
constantly
have to
place a piece of folded paper under one leg to
make
it more or less stable.

I would like to kindly ask you to replace the
table
with the new one.
Otherwise
, I would
really
appreciate if you could mend the
table
or
come
up with a long-term solution to
fix
the short
table
leg.

Please
let
me know if you want me to email you picture of the table.

Also
, do not hesitate to contact me if you require any additional information.

Sincerely
yours,

Anna
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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