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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Mr Jones, My name is Anna Smith and I am one of the tenants in the three-bedroom flat, that is located in the city center. I am writing you regarding the condition of a certain furniture piece we have in the appartment. The round table in the dining room is wobbly due to the fact that it has uneven legs, which makes it difficulte to sit on. Therefore, we constantly have to place a piece of folded paper under one leg to make it more or less stable. I would like to kindly ask you to replace the table with the new one. Otherwise, I would really appreciate if you could mend the table or come up with a long-term solution to fix the short table leg. Please let me know if you want me to email you picture of the table. Also, do not hesitate to contact me if you require any additional information. Sincerely yours, Anna

Dear Mr Jones,

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have to
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make
 it more or less stable.

I would like to kindly ask you to replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounterbuffetbenchstanddeskbar
table
 with the new one. Otherwise
, I would really
 appreciate if you could mend the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounterbuffetbenchstanddeskbar
table
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 up with a long-term solution to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the short You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounterbuffetbenchstanddeskbar
table
 leg.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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let
 me know if you want me to email you picture of the table.

Also
, do not hesitate to contact me if you require any additional information.

Sincerely
 yours,

Anna

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

158 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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