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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I, Deepika, a regular passenger of your bus service would like to highlight recent problems regarding the reliability of the bus 15CA. To begin with, I usually board the bus from vadapalani at 8 PM to reach my office at Tidel Park. However, recently the bus arrives late at the bus station, around 8: 45 AM, and the driver halts the bus 10-15 feet away from the bus stand. I am greatly affected by these new bus timings because I reach my office late by 9: 30 AM or 10 AM, which is not acceptable at my end. Besides, many times I need to run to board the bus, which resulted in missing the bus. I would appreciate it if the company perform a routine check-up of the bus running timings and educate the drivers to adhere to rules and regulations. I hope you give utmost importance to this and make the necessary arrangements to gain the lost trust. I will be waiting to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Deepika

Dear Sir/Madam,

I, Deepika, a regular passenger of your bus service would like to highlight recent problems regarding the reliability of the bus 15CA.

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