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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.

I am writing this letter to explain the situation with my current accommodation. I am not comfortable with the existing set-up, due to which I'm not able to concentrate on my work. Let me describe my situation in more detail. Presently, I am sharing my room with another student who stays awake till late at night and plays loud music. He often calls his friends over and talk and laugh loudly. Due to this, I am not able to concentrate and listen to my colleagues over a call. Moreover, my room is near to the kitchen that makes noise the whole day. All these factors add up and affect my work. I would like to kindly request you to shift me to another room far away from the kitchen and the playground. Please provide me a room with single accommodation and preferably, above the first floor. I look forward to hearing from you.
I am writing this letter to
explain
the situation with my
current
accommodation. I am not comfortable with the existing set-up, due to which I'm not able to concentrate on my work.

Let
me
describe
my situation in more detail.
Presently
, I am sharing my
room
with another student who stays awake till late at night and plays loud music. He
often
calls his friends over and talk and laugh
loudly
. Due to this, I am not able to concentrate and listen to my colleagues over a call.
Moreover
, my
room
is near to the kitchen that
makes
noise the whole day. All these factors
add
up and affect my work.

I would like to kindly request you to shift me to another
room
far away from the kitchen and the playground.
Please
provide me a
room
with single accommodation and
preferably
, above the
first
floor.

I look forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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