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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, 1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. 2. Say what else you could do for the family. 3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.

In response to your advertisement in dawn newspaper, I would like to apply for the job of language teacher for your children. I have completed my master’s in education from a reputed institution and have a 5 years of extensive experience of teaching students English language at different institutions. I am also a certified language instructor from E2 English language institution. I can work at flexible timings as per my customer’s comfortability. My teaching package not only includes English language classes but I can also provide them free aptitude classes which will help them in getting admission in the esteemed schools. The package also includes math and science tuitions to the children of class 4 to 10. Looking for your positive response so that I can get an opportunity to work for you. Yours Faithful, Shenila Faizal

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