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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, 1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. 2. Say what else you could do for the family. 3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.

In response to your advertisement in dawn newspaper, I would like to apply for the job of language teacher for your children. I have completed my master’s in education from a reputed institution and have a 5 years of extensive experience of teaching students English language at different institutions. I am also a certified language instructor from E2 English language institution. I can work at flexible timings as per my customer’s comfortability. My teaching package not only includes English language classes but I can also provide them free aptitude classes which will help them in getting admission in the esteemed schools. The package also includes math and science tuitions to the children of class 4 to 10. Looking for your positive response so that I can get an opportunity to work for you. Yours Faithful, Shenila Faizal
In response to your advertisement in dawn newspaper, I would like to apply for the job of
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language
teacher for your children. I have completed my master’s in education from a reputed institution and have
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a 5
years of extensive experience of teaching students English
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language
at
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different
institutions. I am
also
a certified
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language
instructor from E2 English
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language
institution.

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can work at flexible timings as per my customer’s
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comfortability
. My teaching package not
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only
includes English
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language
classes
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but
I can
also
provide them free aptitude classes which will
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help
them in getting admission in the esteemed schools. The package
also
includes math and science
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tuitions
to the children of
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class
4 to 10.

Looking for your
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positive
response
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so
that I can
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get
an opportunity to work for you.

Yours Faithful,

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Shenila
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Faizal

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, 1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. 2. Say what else you could do for the family. 3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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