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You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it BNrd
Dear John, Mary and Suzy, Hope you all are doing great in office an achieving your weekly targets. I am writing to thank you all for your blessings and the surprise that I received four days ago. As you know, I met with an accident two weeks ago, and unluckily I fractured my leg in that accident. The doctors advised me completele bed rest for fourteen days and admitted me in the hospital ward for the duration period. It was only yesterday that I came back home. During my stay there, I felt so helpless until got your special gift and 'Get well soon' card. I was so overwhelmed while reading the wordings in that card. Tears started flowing from my eyes. Also, I got your gift hamper of different eatables and juices. Definitely, it will boost my energy levels for the upcoming days. I already started consuming the nutritious drinks. It would save my time too in preparing my breakfast. Once again, I wholeheartedly thank you all for your love, support and caring during this bad phase of my life. I will join you all in the office this Monday. Yours sincerely, Michael.
Dear John, Mary and Suzy,

Hope you all are doing great in office an achieving your weekly targets. I am writing to thank you all for your blessings and the surprise that I received four days ago.

As you know, I met with an accident two weeks ago, and
unluckily
I fractured my leg in that accident. The doctors advised me
completele
bed rest for fourteen days and admitted me in the hospital ward for the duration period. It was
only
yesterday that I came back home. During my stay there, I felt
so
helpless until
got
your special gift and '
Get
well
soon
' card.

I was
so
overwhelmed while reading the wordings in that card. Tears
started
flowing from my eyes.
Also
, I
got
your gift hamper of
different
eatables and juices. Definitely, it will boost my energy levels for the upcoming days. I already
started
consuming the nutritious drinks. It would save my time too in preparing my breakfast.

Once again, I
wholeheartedly
thank you all for your
love
, support and caring during this
bad
phase of my life. I will
join
you all in the office this Monday.

Yours
sincerely
, Michael.
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IELTS letter You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

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  American English
6 paragraphs
194 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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