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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have KMRR
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ishita Shah, and I am looking forward to working part-time. My qualification includes a Bachelor's degree in Information Technology and field experience of 6 months. I will be pursuing my Master's course starting next week, hence, planning to work as a half-time developer to support my studies. I am looking for a job that in-lines with my qualification. Probably, I would like to have a developer job, perhaps working on design templates or create websites. I can only work during the afternoons and at weekends as my university studies occupy most of the day. I would be ready to start immediately. I am computer literate. I have worked as a software developer in the previous firm and was responsible for developing websites and mobile applications from scratch. Moreover, I also got hands-on experience and learning on designing those applications. Not only I hold technical skills but I have a strong command of client communication too. It would be appreciable if the agency can help me find appropriate work profiles. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Ishita
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
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Ishita
Shah, and I am looking forward to working part-time. My qualification includes a Bachelor's degree in Information Technology and field experience of 6 months. I will be pursuing my Master's course starting
next
week,
hence
, planning to work as a half-time developer to support my studies.

I am looking for a job that in-lines with my qualification.
Probably
, I would like to have a developer job, perhaps working on design templates or create websites. I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
work during the afternoons and at weekends as my university studies occupy most of the day. I would be ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
immediately.

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I
am
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computer literate
.
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I
have worked as a software developer in the previous firm and was responsible for developing websites and mobile applications from scratch.
Moreover
, I
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
hands-on experience and learning on designing those applications. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
I hold technical
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skills
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but
I have a strong command of client communication too. It would be appreciable if the agency can
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help
me find appropriate work profiles.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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