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A. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • Explain why you changed jobs • Describe your new jobs • Tell him/her you other news.

A. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • Explain why you changed jobs • Describe your new jobs • Tell him/her you other news. pApd
Dear Sam, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. It’s been a long since we last talked to each other. I am writing to tell you why I changed my jobs. Let me explain to you in detail. I was doing a job while studying at a university. This job was not according to my course which is why I left. Then, after graduating from the university I applied for another job. Although the second job was related to the course but it was quite far from my house. So I quit that job as well. Thankfully, after this I got my dream job that is of a English Language Teacher. I have many exciting duties to perform. I have to make lesson plans, teach pre-school students and do collaborative activities with them. I feel excited when I am in a classroom. You won’t believe what I have got! I bought limited edition of Cartier Super Fine pens. You know how much I love collecting pens. I would love to know how your job is going. Waiting eagerly for your reply. With lots of love, Karen
Dear Sam,

How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. It’s been a long since we last talked to each other. I am writing to
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tell
you why I
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changed
my jobs.

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me
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explain
to you in detail. I was doing a
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job
while studying at a university. This
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job
was not according to my course which is why I
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left
. Then, after graduating from the university I applied for another
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job
. Although the second
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job
was related
to the course
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but
it was quite far from my
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house
.
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So
I quit that
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job
as well
.

Thankfully
, after this I
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got
my dream
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job
that is
of
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a
English Language Teacher. I have
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many
exciting duties to perform. I
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have to
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make
lesson plans, teach
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pre-school
students and do collaborative activities with them.
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I
feel excited when I am in a classroom.

You won’t believe what I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
! I
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bought
limited edition of Cartier Super Fine pens. You know how much I
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love
collecting pens.

I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to know how your
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job
is going. Waiting
eagerly
for your reply.

With lots of
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love
,

Karen

IELTS letter A. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • Explain why you changed jobs • Describe your new jobs • Tell him/her you other news.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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