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You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment. WXkD
Dear Paul, I hope you are doing great. I’m writing this letter to tell you about my visit in Hilton valley next week, same town where your university is located. I will be there next week from Monday till Thursday morning. This will be my official trip for 3 days training about some upcoming projects. However, I believe that all the training will be from 8 to 4 and after 4pm we will be free. We will be staying in local hotel named Rendouza hotel over there for whole the time and training Centre will be in same hotel as well. I heard that this hotel is really near from metro and other tourist spots. It would be great if you will suggest me some evening entertainment options in that town as I will be accompanied with my colleagues of same age. Any pub or live music restaurant will be great. Moreover, if you can also advice cheap places for dinner would be great. Hope to get your reply fast. Best Regards, Muhammad
Dear Paul,

I hope you are doing great. I’m writing this letter to
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tell
you about my visit in Hilton valley
next
week, same town where your university
is located
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will be there
next
week from Monday till Thursday morning. This will be my official trip for 3 days training about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
upcoming projects.
However
, I believe that all the training will be from 8 to 4 and after 4pm we will be free.

We will be staying in local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
named
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Rendouza
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hotel
over there for whole the time and training
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.
Centre
will be in same
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hotel
as well
. I heard that this
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hotel
is
really
The usual collocation for "near" is "to" not "from". Did you mean simply "near to" or "further from"?
near from metro
and other tourist spots.

It would be great if you will suggest me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
evening entertainment options in that town as I will be
The usual collocation for "accompany" is "by," not "with." It is better to say this: "accompanied by".
accompanied with
my colleagues of same age. Any pub or
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live
music restaurant will be great.
Moreover
, if you can
also
The word 'advise' is a noun. Did you mean "advise" (verb)?
advice
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
places for dinner would be great.

Hope to
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get
your reply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
.

Best Regards,

Muhammad
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IELTS letter You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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