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You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say. In your letter, you should tell: • how you lost the certificate • why you need it • what you expect the principal to do.

You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say. In your letter, you should tell: • how you lost the certificate • why you need it • what you expect the principal to do. 7mB5
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have participated in the course which has been assigned to me about one month ago in the Lebanese American University titled "Work-Life Balance and the Impact of Remote Working". However, I have lost the certificate and I cannot proof my participation to your side anymore. Let me explain my situation in detail. What happened is that when I was walking in the metro station and I was holding the certificate and talking to my mother on my phone, my certificate slipped from me in the train and when I went down I realized this issue. Can I kindly suggest that you contact the Lebanese American University and request a new E-certificate? Another solution would be sending them an email to confirm my participation. I am deeply sorry and I would really appreciate it if you assist me since I am in a total need for this certificate and without it I will no longer be able to get a raise in my work. Thank you for your consideration, Yours faithfully, Fatima Al Sayed
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I have participated in the course which has
been assigned
to me about one month ago in the Lebanese American University titled
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"
Work-Life Balance and the Impact of Remote Working
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
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.
However
, I have lost the
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certificate
and I cannot proof my participation to your side anymore.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in detail. What happened is that when I was walking in the metro
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station and
I was holding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
and talking to my mother on my phone, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
slipped from me in the train and when I went down I realized this issue.

Can I kindly suggest that you contact the Lebanese American University and request a new E-certificate? Another solution would be
In some texts, you can shorten this phrase. Consider using "emailing them".
sending them an email
to confirm my participation. I am
deeply
sorry and I would
really
appreciate it if you assist me since I am in a total need for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
and without
Consider adding a comma here.
it
I will no longer be able to
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get
a raise in my work.

Thank you for your consideration, Yours
faithfully
, Fatima Al
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Sayed
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IELTS letter You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say. In your letter, you should tell: • how you lost the certificate • why you need it • what you expect the principal to do.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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