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You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter • describe the problem with the jacket. • explain what happened when you tried to return it. • say what you would like the manager to do.

I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction with Jacket I bought from your store. The jacket is ripped from the back, and when I visited the store to get a replacement, they denied doing it. I bought the jacket for a family function next week. I was trying to see how I will look on that day by wearing my new outfit. But when I wore the Jacket, I found it was not stitched properly from the backside. It looks weird from that area. I went to the store from where I purchased it to get it replaced with a new one. But unfortunately, the cashier told me, the store does not have any replacement policies. I completely understood that and requested for a repair to the unstitched part. But again, they said it is not possible to proceed with the following request. I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter at your earliest convenience and help me to get a replacement / repair/ possible discount. If you need further information, please feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Jayant
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my dissatisfaction with
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Jacket
I
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bought
from your
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store
. The
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jacket
is ripped
from the back, and when I visited the
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store
to
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get
a replacement, they denied doing it.

I
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bought
the
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jacket
for a family function
next
week. I was trying to
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see
how I will look on that day by wearing my new outfit.
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But
when I wore the
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Jacket
, I found it was not stitched
properly
from the backside. It looks weird from that area.

I went to the
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store
from where I
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purchased
it to
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get
it replaced with a new one.
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But
unfortunately, the cashier
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told
me, the
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store
does not have any replacement policies. I completely understood that and requested for a repair to the
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unstitched
part.
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But
again, they said it is not possible to proceed with the following request.

I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter at your earliest convenience and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
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get
a replacement / repair/ possible discount. If you need
further
information,
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please
feel free to contact me.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Jayant

IELTS letter You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter • describe the problem with the jacket. • explain what happened when you tried to return it. • say what you would like the manager to do.

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