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You recently bought a digital camera. You discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing.

You recently bought a digital camera. You discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing. pX9ld

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to complain about the digital camera which I bought from your shop. After only two days, things started to go wrong. On the 29th of July I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a digital camera for my brother. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Two days later, my brother made a call and said about the problems of the item. When he used the camera for the first time it worked properly and photographs came out light and clear. However, when he utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. The format of pictures went down when he take photos. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter. I will wait two weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile number at 3456576. Yours faithfully, Tom Hardy.

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to complain about the digital camera which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 two days, things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. On the 29th of July I visited one of your local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a digital camera for my brother. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and I asked a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Two days later, my brother made a call and said about the problems of the item. When he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the camera for the first
 time it worked properly
 and photographs came out light and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
. However
, when he utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. The format of pictures went down when he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "takes", "took".takestook
take
 photos. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter. I will wait two weeks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me at the above address or call me on my mobile number at 3456576. Yours faithfully
, Tom Hardy. 