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Ha Tinh City, Viet Nam 30th August 2021 Dear Duyen, Long times no see you! Are you well? Thank you so much for your invitation to come to your hometown. I hope I’ll visit you after the Covid-19 pandemic has ended. Today, I’d like to tell you about a place of interest in my hometown. That place is the beach called Thien Cam. What you need to know about the beach is being introduced now. Firstly, Thien Cam beach is located in Cam Xuyen district, Ha Tinh province. Secondly, after you have settled in, you can choose to travel by many means such as motorbikes, taxis…Thirdly, you need to pay for living and traveling daily. Moreover, there are some interesting activities on that beach. You can play beach volleyball, swim in the sea, watch the sunrise, go for a walk on the beach at night, eat delicious seafood, visit Con Co…What’s a more amazing thing is that you can rent a boat to visit Hon En island and take unique, memorable photos. Generally, Thien Cam beach is so great that I hope you’ll visit it as soon as possible. I looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Ngoc Bao
Ha
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City,
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Nam

30th August 2021

Dear
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Long times no
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much for your invitation to
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come
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you after the Covid-19 pandemic has ended.
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, I’d like to
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you about a place of interest in my hometown. That place is the
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beach
called
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Thien
Cam. What you need to know about the
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is
being introduced
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.

Firstly
,
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Thien
Cam
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beach
is located
in Cam
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Xuyen
district, Ha
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Tinh
province.
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, after you have settled in, you can choose to travel by
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means such as motorbikes, taxis…
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Thirdly
, you need to pay for living and traveling daily.
Moreover
, there are
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interesting activities on that
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beach
. You can play
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beach
volleyball, swim in the sea,
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watch
the sunrise, go for a walk on the
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beach
at night, eat delicious seafood,
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visit
Con Co…
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What
’s a more amazing thing is that you can rent a boat to
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visit
Hon En island and take unique, memorable photos.

Generally
,
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Thien
Cam
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is
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great that I hope you’ll
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it as
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soon
as possible.

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forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

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Ngoc
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Bao
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